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Re: Elemental RPG
Jaden- “Why are we eating leaves?” Haven asked. “They are not technically leaves… but it is for humbling reasons. If we are to make it to the temple and be ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: To Save the World
(Edward- Darkness- Bad)- “Wait… I want to help you… please?” This made me stop until I heard her cell phone ring. The girl answered it with only three words to ...
Oct 28, 2008 -
Re: Land of Total Randomness
A big explosion caused by a monster drink who got off with his girl friend Red Bull and went to the movies...
Oct 27, 2008 -
Re: Elemental RPG DT
Yay! Cookies!
Oct 25, 2008 -
Re: To Save the World
Edward Marconi- Darkness- Bad I repeated her own question back. “What are you up to? No doubt stalking me.” My comment didn’t seem to etch a mark in her beautiful ...
Oct 25, 2008 -
Re: Land of Total Randomness
...Ran away to where the munchkins lived and ate ten pounds of candy. The candy he didn't eat jumped up and decided to go on their own adventure. So they...
Oct 25, 2008 -
Re: Land of Total Randomness
First offense will be overlooked. Please keep it four posts of plot and nothing less. River took out his razorblade and cut through the wild forests where a snake wrapped ...
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: Scars Unseen
It was a nice story, but somewhat had a lot of holes in it. I really don't know what so I can't tell you what holes to plug up. scasha's ...
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: Land of Total Randomness
While off in some other demention, a person battled evil cats with super awsome ninja skills...
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: Land of Total Randomness
Okay I'm starting this storybook. Rules: 1. No God Modding 2. Don't kill another person's person without their permission via DT. 3. Keep swearing to a minimum. 4. Anyone can ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: To Save the World
Edward- I closed my eyes, struggling against her power. It can’t be that hard. I just remained silent as Auid kept asking where are you dear? She was toying with ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: Hide me...
Even though it was short, I loved it! That was beautiful and... IT RHYMED! Same here: you forgot a few punctuations but other than that it was wonderful. !KUDOS!
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Don't Hide.
Hey this is Jaden G. I loved your poem! It was very good and the truth of it inside the everyday family is very real. But now to the editing: ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Elemental RPG
Jaden- I sighed as the sun rose higher into the sky, banishing all the wonderful colors. The look on Gregory’s face reflected my feelings. “They never last long. One minute ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: What was it like?
Good job! I like how you asked all of the questions. It's not really questioning Jesus but wondering what it felt like and being in awe that he did it. ...
Oct 22, 2008
